Minor: Character Base Designs 5
Updated Sun's face abit more after getting some feed back on how to make him look more masculine, as in moving the eyes alittle smaller and changing the shape of the nose.
Minor: Pre-viz and notes
This is the per-viz for my Minor project that I have been working on over the summer. I set about doing this to get a better idea of now some of the shots would play out and to test out now some of the pops be shown. I am happy with some of the shot, such as the way that the Sun and Moon are introduceed, close ups that I have used for both characters, the way that Moon swings round with the crown along with the way the image fades out on the Sun at the end. I'm not too happy with some of the shots that have the characters moving around but this might be because I was focused on the walk cycle and I might not need it in my finished animation. I also think that the shot of the sun and moon spining round might have been done abit better.
Me again :) So I think the King's crown needs just a little touch of detailing to stop it looking quite so much as if he has half a lettuce/tulip on his head - consider putting a band around the base of it, and also something like a 'jewel' or focal point at its centre - I think it will say 'crown' more immediately - and also 'regal'. Have a go :)
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