Updated Sun's face abit more after getting some feed back on how to make him look more masculine, as in moving the eyes alittle smaller and changing the shape of the nose.
Me again :) So I think the King's crown needs just a little touch of detailing to stop it looking quite so much as if he has half a lettuce/tulip on his head - consider putting a band around the base of it, and also something like a 'jewel' or focal point at its centre - I think it will say 'crown' more immediately - and also 'regal'. Have a go :)
For the start of our Script To Screen project we picked at random three different elements that have to feature in our animation, these different elements were a character, location and a prop. For my animation I have to included: Character - Light House Keeper Location - Cemetery Prop - Food Blender
After presenting my ideas for my animation I was given the idea of making the characters of the Sun and Moon look like paper lanterns. This idea would fit in with giving the story a sense of history and culture along with helping me to think about the overall designs of the characters.
After having some time to step away from my work I can now see some of the parts that I need to work on to complete my animation. One of the starting points is reworking the characters' faces so at they fit more with the characters' overall design. This would mean changing the whole shape of the eye along with using a different set of colours and textures to make them sit better on the face. When I get a better idea of the colours that I am going to be using I can start to work on the overall eye shape. Note: Both of the number 1s in the image below are the original designs that I have been working with. Moon face colour tests Sun face colour tests
Me again :) So I think the King's crown needs just a little touch of detailing to stop it looking quite so much as if he has half a lettuce/tulip on his head - consider putting a band around the base of it, and also something like a 'jewel' or focal point at its centre - I think it will say 'crown' more immediately - and also 'regal'. Have a go :)
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