Minor: Character Base Designs 5
Updated Sun's face abit more after getting some feed back on how to make him look more masculine, as in moving the eyes alittle smaller and changing the shape of the nose.
Story Ideas - Re-write
After getting some feedback on my story idea I chose to re-write to try and develop it further. Story Idea - Re-write A young girl and her father, a light house keeper, are out fishing at sea and all seems fine. However, when they are going back to shore a storm suddenly appears and the boat hits the rocks throwing them both out in to the sea. Years later, in the present, we see that the girl has survived the accident and has now grown up. She is seen standing in front of her father’s grave showing that he didn’t survive, it is also shown that she has become a light house keeper herself to carry on his memory and to protect others from the same fate. However, the grief of her loss is still with her as she now spends all of her days and nights locked away in her light house on her own with none to talk to. However, a young man appears at her door one day and introduces himself as having moved into the old fisherman’s cottage by the shore. He tries to befriend her, ...
Me again :) So I think the King's crown needs just a little touch of detailing to stop it looking quite so much as if he has half a lettuce/tulip on his head - consider putting a band around the base of it, and also something like a 'jewel' or focal point at its centre - I think it will say 'crown' more immediately - and also 'regal'. Have a go :)
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