Hi Rhia - I think it looks a bit odd that the bottom of the crescent moon of Moon's hat isn't a nice complete curve - I'd consider changing that so it looks less like a 'bit is missing'... what do you think?
I am working on fixing that so that larger moon isn't merging in to the band of the crown. It's only like that as I was making it fit to the orthographs for the time being.
I've been improving parts of my animation to iron out any of the parts that I wasn't able to do while animating the first around. It's only small tweaks but it will make the difference in the all run.
Walk Cycle test from Rhia Crouch on Vimeo . Been trying to work on Moom's walk for a skit but I'm not sure what else to do before I put him in to the screen so I can work out him swimming and coming out of the water. He is meant to walk as if he is weigh down by the goo and also wobbels a little bit. I know the eyes are off and there seems to be a phantom animation going on with his right hand that I can't work out.
After getting some feedback on my story idea I chose to re-write to try and develop it further. Story Idea - Re-write A young girl and her father, a light house keeper, are out fishing at sea and all seems fine. However, when they are going back to shore a storm suddenly appears and the boat hits the rocks throwing them both out in to the sea. Years later, in the present, we see that the girl has survived the accident and has now grown up. She is seen standing in front of her father’s grave showing that he didn’t survive, it is also shown that she has become a light house keeper herself to carry on his memory and to protect others from the same fate. However, the grief of her loss is still with her as she now spends all of her days and nights locked away in her light house on her own with none to talk to. However, a young man appears at her door one day and introduces himself as having moved into the old fisherman’s cottage by the shore. He tries to befriend her, ...
Hi Rhia - I think it looks a bit odd that the bottom of the crescent moon of Moon's hat isn't a nice complete curve - I'd consider changing that so it looks less like a 'bit is missing'... what do you think?
ReplyDeleteI am working on fixing that so that larger moon isn't merging in to the band of the crown. It's only like that as I was making it fit to the orthographs for the time being.
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