Premise: Moon Design Redo

This is a re-design of Moon after I had got some feed back about the overall design. There are some elements that I'm not happy with, such as the crown and hands, but I do plan to go back and change them.

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  1. tutorphil2:42 pm, April 23, 2018

    can you try something new with the 'tail' - think of her as having legs in there covered by a long floating trail - for example, if you imagine the dress is essentially a long cone with a scalloped bottom edge...

    http://store.christiansiriano.com/category/sketches

    I think you need to think even bigger in terms of exaggeration and attenuation of her shape - I also think you should make those crescent moons bigger - create a series of iterations of this same character in which you REALLY push the exaggeration - so a version with HUGE crescent moons and then a version with smaller, but still BIG crescent moons - and a version where you put a massive long/wide cone dress on the bottom of her - think more theatrically - for example, imagine that her skirt is like this lovely big cone that is illuminated within by swirling moving shapes like one of these...

    https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/214695107211840010/?lp=true

    and maybe considering giving her long 'evening gloves' instead to enhance her sophistication?

    http://www.eveningelegance.com/evening-gloves/

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    1. graeme daly9:09 pm, April 23, 2018

      Hi Rhia

      going on what Phil said, check out this beautiful music video by an Estonian artist named Kerli, notice the dress - how it glows and pulsates and the way that the hair is bulbous like a flower about to bloom, Kerli has always been inspiring at conceptualising the meaning behind her lyrics through her visuals (which she directs and makes all the costumes for) - it might inspire something in your designs, you should watch the making of her music videos too :)

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fhu2G-207Ko

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    2. Rhia Crouch - BA (Hons) Computer Animation Arts, UCA Rochester1:36 pm, April 24, 2018

      Thanks, I'll look in to it. :3

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